I finally, truly feel like I’m getting somewhere

Yesterday I finished editing chapter 2.  There are still a few sentences I’m not completely happy with, but I can live with that until I get some brain wave telling me how they could be better. 

I’ve had a great response from people who’ve read chapter 1 and the prologue, which makes me feel that maybe this is actually going to work.  Thanks to everyone who’s left a comment.

Finally, I’m going out of town for the next week.  We’re going to Lake Powell, and we’re so excited — and ready.  One whole week of water, wave runners, houseboat, and lifejackets.  I’m hoping to get through at least one chapter while I’m there, but you know how vacation goes.