Yesterday I finished editing chapter 2. There are still a few sentences I’m not completely happy with, but I can live with that until I get some brain wave telling me how they could be better.
I’ve had a great response from people who’ve read chapter 1 and the prologue, which makes me feel that maybe this is actually going to work. Thanks to everyone who’s left a comment.
Finally, I’m going out of town for the next week. We’re going to Lake Powell, and we’re so excited — and ready. One whole week of water, wave runners, houseboat, and lifejackets. I’m hoping to get through at least one chapter while I’m there, but you know how vacation goes.