I know, I’ve been writing this book for a long time. And here’s why in two words: Chapter One. I’ve rewritten this chapter so many times I can’t even count. First it had too much telling, too much backstory. Then it didn’t hook readers fast enough. Then…well you get the idea. I hope I’ve finally overcome all of these flaws to have a chapter one that catches the readers attention, introduces the mc, and also leaves enough unanswered questiosn that the reader wants to keep reading.
Let me know what you think. You can access it under the “My Book” tab at the top of the page.