Finally…a revised chapter one

So it took me longer than I thought to get chapter one revised.  But…I think it’s so much better.  If anyone reads it, please tell me what you think.  I especially want to know a few things:  Do you like Ethan?  Do you care what happens next?  Would you want to keep reading?

2 thoughts on “Finally…a revised chapter one

  1. It’s always exciting to have the opening chapter on paper and in a real tangible form that you can hold and know it’s not your imagination!

    Embrace that momentum and plow through some serious word count. I’ve got a knack for spotting someone who will eventually get the job done, and by the looks of it, my gut is saying you will.

    But it’s going to take a lot of perseverance. Keep at it and good luck. I’ll be watching you. I just put a link to this blog on my page! 🙂


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