I had another one of my beta readers send me back the entire manuscript. Again, she had some suggestions and a few things that bothered her, but she liked it!!! Here are a few of my favorite comments.
“Thanks for the fun read.”
“Overall, I loved this and would buy it if I saw it.”
“I’ve actually had the past two days to get through this and haven’t stopped reading.”
I was soooo excited.
In other news, I’ve been working hard on getting the first chapter finished. I’ve read through and tried to incorporate the suggestions made by my readers. I’ve even rewritten the entire first scene, but I think it’s a lot better now. Hopefully, I’ll have it posted here within the next few days.